Kia ora Theresa. Wow, your poem has made me feel more Christmasy! Have you tried writing any other types of poem? Maybe check the order of your lines because I think you might have swapped two letters.
Hi Phil I will fix that mistake. I have tried doing other poems one of them are sence poems and there is a syllable poem I forgot the name once I remember I will let you know.
Kia ora Theresa. Wow, your poem has made me feel more Christmasy! Have you tried writing any other types of poem? Maybe check the order of your lines because I think you might have swapped two letters.
ReplyDeleteHi Phil I will fix that mistake. I have tried doing other poems one of them are sence poems and there is a syllable poem I forgot the name once I remember I will let you know.
ReplyDeleteIt's a haiku
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